{"id":95,"date":"2013-01-02T16:50:22","date_gmt":"2013-01-02T14:50:22","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/suchwanderings.wordpress.com\/?p=95"},"modified":"2013-01-02T16:50:22","modified_gmt":"2013-01-02T14:50:22","slug":"poetry-experiment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/snuu.kapsi.fi\/saranorja\/2013\/01\/02\/poetry-experiment\/","title":{"rendered":"Poetry experiment"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Am on sick leave today because the wretched remnants of illness still lingered this morning. My New Year&#8217;s Eve was spent with a fever; I was so out of it that I was extremely content to be alone, and toasted the new year with a cup of peppermint tea. I&#8217;ve been under the weather ever since. But since I feel okay right now (finally, an appetite and less nausea!) I&#8217;m hoping that I&#8217;ll be fully well again tomorrow.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway. Due to being alone on NYE, I was able to start off the year with a poem. Nice. Wasn&#8217;t a good one, but it was good to write.<\/p>\n<p>Today I&#8217;ve been trying to get back into a specfic-ish story (well, novelette, really) that I started back in December 2010. It&#8217;s got potential, I think. I need to finish the actual plot and then get to editing.<\/p>\n<p>But so far I&#8217;ve been too tired and headachy to get into the novelette. Bleh. Instead I decided to do a poem challenge from <a href=\"http:\/\/namingconstellations.wordpress.com\/\">Joseph Harker&#8217;s<\/a> delightful blog (I&#8217;ve been reading through the archives. Damn, that man is a talented poet!).<\/p>\n<p>The basic premise of <a href=\"http:\/\/namingconstellations.wordpress.com\/2012\/05\/26\/reverie-twenty-one-charm-bracelet\/\">this particular prompt<\/a> is to create a little series of &#8220;poemlets&#8221;, like charms on a bracelet. See the original post for the full instructions. I chose seven of Joseph&#8217;s themes (childhood memory\/linguistic beauty\/keeping a secret\/romantic encounter\/discovering laughter\/life goal\/telling the future) and started playing. Here are the extra elements (quoted from his blog post):<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>first poemlet: mention your birthstone<br \/>\nsecond poemlet: use a word with three or more syllables<br \/>\nthird poemlet: mention your zodiac sign<br \/>\nfourth poemlet: use at least three capital letters (\u201cI\u201d on its own, and the beginnings of lines, do not count)<br \/>\nfifth poemlet: pick a color and use at least two synonyms\/varieties\/shades of it<br \/>\nsixth poemlet: use as many different kinds of punctuation mark as you can<br \/>\nseventh poemlet: surprise us with something fancy!<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Anyway, this is an experiment that I&#8217;m unlikely to end up submitting to be published, so I thought I&#8217;d share it with my readers. \ud83d\ude42 <\/p>\n<p>[I would&#8217;ve wanted the roman numerals to be on the same level as the first line of each charmlet, with the rest of the stanza indented, but apparently that&#8217;s beyond my html skills and I&#8217;m too tired to figure it out now. So have this version, with the numerals above. \/end perfectionism]<\/p>\n<p>* * *<\/p>\n<p><b>Charmlets<\/b><\/p>\n<p>i.<br \/>\nsticky summer, eating watermelon<br \/>\nby the bucketful, the richness<br \/>\nof it, like gobbling down<br \/>\nsoft tourmalines<\/p>\n<p>ii.<br \/>\npeeling back the centuries<br \/>\nto Caedmon\u2019s hymn<br \/>\nI shiver<br \/>\nat the reconstructed sounds,<br \/>\nthe stark vowels<br \/>\nhumming down in my throat<\/p>\n<p>iii.<br \/>\nScorpios keep secrets well, they say.<br \/>\nPerhaps I do, although I toss<br \/>\nhoroscopes down the drain.<br \/>\nAfter all, some secrets I kept<br \/>\nfor years. <\/p>\n<p>iv.<br \/>\nwhen I first met you,<br \/>\nand You, and YOu, and YOU,<br \/>\nmy heart didn\u2019t know<br \/>\nwhat wonders were ahead<br \/>\non this winding road<br \/>\nleading downriver<\/p>\n<p>v.<br \/>\nThat summer I learnt to laugh again.<br \/>\nThe grass seemed greener<br \/>\nthan heaven, as I sank down<br \/>\nonto the malachite bed<br \/>\nprepared for me<br \/>\nby nature \u2013<br \/>\nthat moss-fingered mother. <\/p>\n<p>vi.<br \/>\nOh \u2013 to struggle for it<br \/>\nand grasp it too! No fear<br \/>\n(no fear); just the blossoming woods<br \/>\nof my work: beauty written<br \/>\ndown onto each petal&#8230;<br \/>\ndare I? dare I?<\/p>\n<p>vii.<br \/>\nIf<br \/>\nI could<br \/>\nreach down into my soul,<br \/>\ngrasp a surety beyond the shoal<br \/>\nof slippery wishes, and see<br \/>\nmy future before me \u2013<br \/>\nif I could,<br \/>\nwould<br \/>\nI?<\/p>\n<p>* * *<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Am on sick leave today because the wretched remnants of illness still lingered this morning. My New Year&#8217;s Eve was spent with a fever; I was so out of it that I was extremely content to be alone, and toasted the new year with a cup of peppermint tea. 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